Draft 4 Rewrite Plan

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# Draft 4 Rewrite Plan
Category: Rewrite Plans
Project: The Last Take
Version: 1
Status: Draft

Prioritized scene and character fixes projected to lift the score into the high 80s.

Rewrite Plan
- High: Move Mara's public failure into the opening image (impact 14)
- High: Create a midpoint reversal that changes the investigation method (impact 12)
- Medium: Give Elias one emotionally legible private motive (impact 8)