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Draft 4 Rewrite Plan
Prioritized scene and character fixes projected to lift the score into the high 80s.
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# Draft 4 Rewrite Plan Category: Rewrite Plans Project: The Last Take Version: 1 Status: Draft Prioritized scene and character fixes projected to lift the score into the high 80s. Rewrite Plan - High: Move Mara's public failure into the opening image (impact 14) - High: Create a midpoint reversal that changes the investigation method (impact 12) - Medium: Give Elias one emotionally legible private motive (impact 8)